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Friday, 10 May 2019

Show, Don't Tell


The air filled with a familiar smell it was feces in the public toilet
from yesterday all runny i felt it creeping down my leg the small
clumps of corn rolling itt made me want to vomit my butt was
clenched  trying to hold it in  it was to late it explode a hole
 straight through my pants  feces all behind me as far as i could see
which wasn't that far because i can't see far and it was a pitch black
night when  i went to move again then three more times then out of
nowhere a small ball of feces few at my face before i knew it there
were thousands hitting me i could hear what it was it was feces
throwing monkeys

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