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Friday, 15 April 2016

In The Trenches

Bullets flying over top through the sandbags as fast as a falcon diving,trying to ignite the deadly explosives nearby and kill them in progress of working. I'm curious how the enemies memorise what area the explosives were.


Rodents crawling and scavenging for food, feasting on dead bodies like a hyena starving..It is a mystery where the wild rats came from. At the deadline of the war where did the gargantuan filthy rodents go?


People producing before they got to a toilet, because they had diarrhea as slimy and runny as a slug.  Colossal queues like a new shop opening in the center of an empire. It makes me wonder what were the toilets and where were the locations. Did they clean the revolting stuff up?

Guardians dead on guard, look like they are looking with a view like an eagle's. Enemies lurk and adventure around the deadly and dismantled zone with an interior like  a planet that exploded in an asteroid field. I wonder if they had been planning an ambush and where did the bullets come from?

1 comment:

  1. Wow Cameron......this is a powerful piece of writing. It shows how horrible and scary life was as a soldier. They are my heroes. My favourite line was -
    Rodents crawling and scavenging for food, feasting on dead bodies like a hyena starving..It is a mystery where the wild rats came from.

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